瑞安中学2014学年第一学期高三10月月考英语答题卷

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第三部分：写作（共两节，满分40分）

第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

    下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

    修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下而写上修改后的词。

    注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

During the vacation, the weather was hot and I could do much work, but I lived happily. On the morning I usually got up early and take a walk in the garden. After breakfast, I began reading English and did some exercise in maths. I worked quite hardly and made great progress. I spent nearly the whole afternoon outside. I went swim in the river and didn’t come back when it was about five or six. Sometimes a friend of me would come to see me and we would spend some hours listened to music. In this way I spent my vacation happily. I not only studied well and but also became a good swimmer. 

第二节：书面表达（满分30分）

请你以一则公益广告——Don’t let the keyboard separate you and your loved ones为题写一篇发言稿，谈谈网络给我们带来的好处，同时指出其弊端，并呼吁人们放下手中的鼠标与家人多多沟通，享受与家人在一起的美好时光。

注意：1．词数：120左右；

2．题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数

瑞安中学2014学年第一学期高三10月月考英语答案

参考答案1---5  BADBB  6---10 DCDCA  11---15 CDCBD  16---20  DADBB

21-25 BCADB    26-30 CBDAC     31-35 DABBC    36-40 BABAC

41---45 CDCAC   46---49 DACD   50---54 BADAC  55---60  BCACDB

61---65  BAEDF

66.do前加not    67.on改为in    68.take改为took    69. exercise 改为exercises

70. hardly改为hard   71. swim改为swimming    72.when改为until    73.me改为mine  

74.listen改为listening  75.去掉and

书面表达

Hello, everyone! Today the number of the netizens in our country has increased rapidly, yet many of them do not pay enough attention to the family. There’s no doubt that we benefit much from the Internet. For example, it’s convenient for us to get the information we need and communicate with our friends and relatives. Meanwhile, it can help us learn what is happening both at home and abroad. However, addicted to the internet, we may spend less time communicating with your loved ones. Therefore, no matter how attractive the Internet is, we shouldn’t be separated from our loved ones. Therefore, just for a moment, we should stop surfing the Internet and spend time with our families, enjoying the time when we are together. So just remember this: don’t let the keyboard separate you and your loved ones.

Please take action! That’s all. Thank you!